im never mean but uh .....ASRE U OUT OF YOUR FREAKING MINDeh hmm excuse me ok im no critiuqe but ur socks look like theyre part of the legs ur legs look like chibi legs with shoes under them and what is up with the arms ok i suck but i know what proper anatomy is-posistion things the way u want but dont make it look inhuman - best friend - ok ive never submitted a deviation cuz i was afraid ppl wud critsize me and i dont know how hehe but when i do im submitting tutorials on anatomy ill send u link when i submit them sincerly suckydrawer morgan
thank you for ur constructive critisism lol i have gotten a lot better, i got a manga drawing book that has helped me alot but i havent submitted any of my new drawings yet lol. but thank you for taking time to comment.
Hey it's me!! Don't forget to add me! Well I can see some areas that you need to improve on. Let's start with the head...
-There's no forhead.. (add a little space between the hair and the eyes) -The eyes are a bit too wide.. (make the eyes a bit thinner but not too much that they'll look tiny) -The mouth is a bit off to the left.. (its not that noticable but make sure you align the noes and the mouth from the line that divides the face in half from top to bottom) -The head is flat.. (Make sure the top of the head is curved like a circle but when you reach the bottom of the face (where the chin is) you're doing fine) -The tears look like drops.. (I don't really know how to help you but what I do is I make a line from the eye to the side of the chin. I leave a bit of a bulge at the end of the line so it looks like a tear drop that is about to fall from the face)
Ok so that's what you have to work on for the head of this artwork. I'll keep on adding comments on this though because there are more you need to work on.
What I would suggest doing is looking at some other pieces of artwork and using little things from them. Hey, why not try sketching some stuff from Lovehina? My sister [link] Draws anime/manga all the time, I think you'll love her work.
Another Tip is to try and use shading to the figure, so it makes her look like she's 3D. This is a hard thing to accomplish and takes alot of practice.