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manga girl crying by mangagal1 manga girl crying by mangagal1
this is a manga girl that i drew today, i hope you like her:P please comment:D
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nomadwolf1222 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2010
im never mean but uh .....ASRE U OUT OF YOUR FREAKING MINDeh hmm excuse me ok im no critiuqe but ur socks look like theyre part of the legs ur legs look like chibi legs with shoes under them and what is up with the arms ok i suck but i know what proper anatomy is-posistion things the way u want but dont make it look inhuman - best friend - ok ive never submitted a deviation cuz i was afraid ppl wud critsize me and i dont know how hehe but when i do im submitting tutorials on anatomy ill send u link when i submit them
sincerly suckydrawer morgan
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mangagal1 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you for ur constructive critisism lol:P i have gotten a lot better, i got a manga drawing book that has helped me alot but i havent submitted any of my new drawings yet lol. but thank you for taking time to comment.
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MangaAnimeLover Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
'Ello again :)

A couple of days ago, when I saw this, I decided to try and show you how to make it better. So I have drawn my version of it and written comments on it. If you feel like, you could take a look ^^

[link]

I hope it is of any help to you :)
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AtomicMangosAdopts Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey it's me!! Don't forget to add me! Well I can see some areas that you need to improve on. Let's start with the head...

-There's no forhead.. (add a little space between the hair and the eyes)
-The eyes are a bit too wide.. (make the eyes a bit thinner but not too much that they'll look tiny)
-The mouth is a bit off to the left.. (its not that noticable but make sure you align the noes and the mouth from the line that divides the face in half from top to bottom)
-The head is flat.. (Make sure the top of the head is curved like a circle but when you reach the bottom of the face (where the chin is) you're doing fine)
-The tears look like drops.. (I don't really know how to help you but what I do is I make a line from the eye to the side of the chin. I leave a bit of a bulge at the end of the line so it looks like a tear drop that is about to fall from the face)

Ok so that's what you have to work on for the head of this artwork. I'll keep on adding comments on this though because there are more you need to work on.
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mangagal1 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you so much for the comment! It is going to help me a lot:D I will add you now! please keep giving me comments!:-)
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darkspeeds Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Not bad at all. There's much to improve if you want to achieve the anime look - but nevertheless this is an art style on it's own so do keep up the awesome work.
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mangagal1 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
thanx, i like the advice you gave, i am working on anatomy at the moment cus their bodies are a bit out of proprotion! :D
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jaspaholic96 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009
OMG almighty-pedestrian i bet u couldnt do better kirsten is the best drawer ever. GET A FUCKING LIFE LOZER!

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PRETTY AS KIRSTEN :D ILY
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AnimeOtaku01 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
Nice Nice work :D
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mangagal1 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you :D
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RyuFoxx Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
Great work on this!

The hair is great, as is the bodys shape.

What I would suggest doing is looking at some other pieces of artwork and using little things from them. Hey, why not try sketching some stuff from Lovehina? My sister [link] Draws anime/manga all the time, I think you'll love her work.

Another Tip is to try and use shading to the figure, so it makes her look like she's 3D. This is a hard thing to accomplish and takes alot of practice.
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mangagal1 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
ok, i will take a look, thank you so much!!
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SkyMaro Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not bad, not bad!
Couple notes.
1. When drawing tears, they're not usually drops. They're more like streaks down the face. Like so, [link]

2. Also, when crying, the eyebrows are usually pointed upward and the eyes need to look more tightly closed.

Other than that, you have some major potential. Keep it up!
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mangagal1 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
ok thanks, that was the first time i drew a manga girl crying, it was ok but i think i can do better:D thanks for taking the time to have a look, and i will try out ur tips:D
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almighty-pedestrian Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
That's pretty goddamn bad, but then again I sucked major balls when I started drawing "manga" style as well.

Don't be afraid to challenge yourself, and always try various poses. Books on anatomy are god too.
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mangagal1 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
lol, heey add me on deviant watch and i will add you:D thanks for commenting, i will have a look at some of urs!
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almighty-pedestrian Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
My page is blank. I only support non-profit art sites, see.

Sorry, but I don't add people willy-nilly. It's usually my friends and those who's art interests me...
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mangagal1 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
ohh ok, what do you mean by non profit art. Thats ok, total understandable.
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piggywiggy-chan Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
cute <3
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mangagal1 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks, heeey add me on deviant watch!
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piggywiggy-chan Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
welcomeeeey <3
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mangagal1 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
can you pleaseeeee take a look at some of my other artwork? it would be much appreciated!:D
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piggywiggy-chan Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
okie dokie <3
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